Starlight’s Revenge 1 – Royal Sisters
Published: 2024-11-29 14:00:00
Starlight’s Revenge 1 – Royal Sisters
Starlight Glimmer has never forgiven Twilight for ruining her little utopia. She discovers a spell that allows her to devour the rulers of Equestria and absorb their powers. Of course, she doesn’t hesitate to use it the very same day she found it…
Please be advised this story is 4k words long and contains the following: MLP setting, mean female unicorn pred (Starlight), unwilling to willing female alicorn preys (Celestia, Luna), hypnosis, F/F sex, rape, vaginal fisting (or should we call it ‘hooving’ in this particular case? :D), cunnilingus, masturbation, same size oral vore, massive belly bulge, fatal yet painless gooey digestion, weight gain, transformation (Starlight becomes an alicorn after digesting the princesses). Reader’s discretion is advised – enjoy! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
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Starlight was sitting in the library of the Castle of Friendship. She had no clue how reading a book about Equestrian History was supposed to make her better in socializing. It was strange that someone as socially awkward as Twilight Sparkle became the Princess of Friendship to begin with.
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Starlight’s Revenge 1 – Royal Sisters
Published: 2024-11-29 14:00:00
Type:
NSFW
Created: November 27, 2024
Creator: RedNastyFox
Word Count: 4538 words | ~20min
Tags: alicorn prey, belly bulge, commission, cunnilingus, F/F, fanfiction, fatal vore, female pred, female prey, gooey digestion, hypnosis, hypnotized prey, incest, masturbation, MLP, My Little Pony, oral sex, oral vore, pony pred, pony prey, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, rape, same size, sex, Starlight Glimmer, superfun, transformation, unicorn pred, unwilling to willing, vore story, weight gain
Description:
Starlight Glimmer has never forgiven Twilight for ruining her little utopia. She discovers a spell that allows her to devour the rulers of Equestria and absorb their powers. Of course, she doesn’t hesitate to use it the very same day she found it…
This story is a commission I wrote for Superfun.
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All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
Cover artwork is a screenshot from original MLP FiM show, Season 5, Episode 1 – The Cutie Map. I took it from mlp.fandom.com
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Incredible work!! This chapter has everything- regurgitation, lburping, torture, feeling the prey go through the guts… this is the hottest thing I’ve read in a long time O_O
If there was painful digestion in this chapter I think I would’ve milked myself dry >_<
Aww, thank you! :3
We still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this website yet unfortunately. I assume you commented on Chapter 4, in which Starlight tortures Spitfire by devouring her mom and belching her in the face as she digests her? It surely was fun to write, and I definitely would make digestion graphic and add disposal too! >:3 Unfortunately, the commissioner doesn’t like those. 🙁
Yes, that comment was on chapter 4!! As much as I love non-fatal / safe digestion, I’m so excited for future stories with painful digestion.
Looking forward to May and June-Dimalad and Chrono have commissioned some of your best! I’m especially looking forward to the story with Daybreaker ^^
I will try my best to make those stories great! 😉
By the way, since you’ve already finished the 4th part of Starlight’s Revenge series, can I ask you for a little favor in the form of a more detailed review on part 5? I spent one week writing it and one more week editing it. I’m on the fence whether putting this much effort into it was worth it, and is it even noticeable to an average reader compared to the previous parts?
Very well written. My only complaint:
“ Then the ball hit the floor and bounced a few times, proving that it was completely solid inside.”
That’s not how sphere’s work. Bouncing relies on surface tension, not whether or not something’s solid. Basketballs are a great example. Sorry if I’m being nitpicky. 😅
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed the story! :3
Unfortunately, we still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this site yet, so they keep appearing under the first chapter regardless of which chapter was commented. I assume you commented on chapter 2, in which Twilight tries to attack Starlight with a sword, and Starlight shrinks it into a ball using her magic, right?
I’m afraid you’re incorrect. Surface tension is a term applied specifically to liquids. It occurs in the surface layer of molecules due to cohesive electrostatic forces that pull all the molecules of the liquid together. In the body of liquid they are equal in all directions, but on the surface they’re imbalanced due to the lack of liquid on one side, causing the natural effect that strives to minimize the possible surface area of the liquid.
Basketball ball bounces because its elastic rubber surface deforms and compresses the air inside, which is already under pressure exceeding atmospheric on the outside. The compressed air acts like a spring that expands and restores the spherical shape of the ball, causing it to bounce from the surface it hit. Car tires work the same way, absorbing shocks from road bumps.
A metal ball bounces off the stone floor due to nearly perfect elastic collision of two solid bodies with minimal losses of kinetic energy. This effect would be far less pronounced if the metal ball had any substantial cavities/irregularities, causing the loss of kinetic energy due to plastic deformation of its walls.
100% my bad then… feel free to delete my comment.
No worries, let it be for the others who may have similar questions! 😛
Thank you for commenting in the first place! :3 I wish my readers were more active overall. 🙁