Starlight’s Revenge 4 β Wonderbolts
Published: 2025-12-01 15:00:00
Starlight is pissed when the Wonderbolts don’t show up at the Canterlot Derby in honor of her coronation. She visits Spitfire and devours her mother before her eyes despite her desperate resistance. She then curses Spitfire to devour her favorite student, Surprise, when she fails her training, so that she will realize the importance of her duty to train the Wonderbolts well.
Please be advised this story is 8k words long and contains the following: MLP setting, cruel female alicorn pred (Starlight Glimmer) & unwilling female pegasus prey (Stormy Flare), hypnotized unwilling female pegasus pred (Spitfire) & unwilling female pegasus prey (Surprise), Blaze & Soarin as observers, rape (Starlight fucks Stormy’s pussy with her tongue as she devours her until she cums), same size (Spitfire & Surprise), size difference (Starlight & Stormy), oral vore, painless but fatal gooey digestion. The story is focused on torture and misery of both preys and Spitfire. Reader’s discretion is advised – enjoy! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
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Canterlot’s Cloud Stadium was filled to the brim with ponies. The lower seats were occupied by commoners, the upper seats were occupied by noble ponies, but above them all was the VIP seats that were usually occupied by Royal Sisters and their cronies. But since both Royal Sisters and their cronies were now padding Starlight’s flanks, she took their place.
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Starlight’s Revenge 4 β Wonderbolts
Published: 2025-12-01 15:00:00
Type:
NSFW
Created: December 1, 2025
Creator: RedNastyFox
Word Count: 8076 words | ~36min
Tags: alicorn pred, belly bulge, bigger pred, Blaze, commission, cruel pred, digestion, fanfiction, fatal, female pred, female prey, gooey digestion, hypnosis, mind control, MLP, My Little Pony, non-con, oral vore, pegasus pred, pegasus prey, pony pred, pony prey, rape, same size, size difference, smaller prey, Soarin, Spitfire, Starlight Glimmer, Stormy Flare, superfun, Surprise, teasing pred, unwilling pred, unwilling prey, vore story
Description:
Starlight is pissed when the Wonderbolts don’t show up at the Canterlot Derby in honor of her coronation. She visits Spitfire and devours her mother before her eyes despite her desperate resistance. She then curses Spitfire to devour her favorite student, Surprise, when she fails her training, so that she will realize the importance of her duty to train the Wonderbolts well.
This story is a commission I wrote for Superfun.
If you want to commission a story from me β check out the Commission Info on RedNastyFox.com! Feel free to boop me anytime β I’m always open to new clients! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
Cover artwork is a screenshot from s5e2 of the original show.
Feel free to repost this content on two conditions: credit me as the creator and attach a link to the original post on my website so it can be easily found. I’m a small creator trying to survive in this big and scary world, and I’d appreciate any help with promotion.
Incredible work!! This chapter has everything- regurgitation, lburping, torture, feeling the prey go through the gutsβ¦ this is the hottest thing Iβve read in a long time O_O
If there was painful digestion in this chapter I think I wouldβve milked myself dry >_<
Aww, thank you! :3
We still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this website yet unfortunately. I assume you commented on Chapter 4, in which Starlight tortures Spitfire by devouring her mom and belching her in the face as she digests her? It surely was fun to write, and I definitely would make digestion graphic and add disposal too! >:3 Unfortunately, the commissioner doesn’t like those. π
Yes, that comment was on chapter 4!! As much as I love non-fatal / safe digestion, Iβm so excited for future stories with painful digestion.
Looking forward to May and June-Dimalad and Chrono have commissioned some of your best! Iβm especially looking forward to the story with Daybreaker ^^
I will try my best to make those stories great! π
By the way, since you’ve already finished the 4th part of Starlight’s Revenge series, can I ask you for a little favor in the form of a more detailed review on part 5? I spent one week writing it and one more week editing it. I’m on the fence whether putting this much effort into it was worth it, and is it even noticeable to an average reader compared to the previous parts?
Very well written. My only complaint:
β Then the ball hit the floor and bounced a few times, proving that it was completely solid inside.β
Thatβs not how sphereβs work. Bouncing relies on surface tension, not whether or not somethingβs solid. Basketballs are a great example. Sorry if Iβm being nitpicky. π
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed the story! :3
Unfortunately, we still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this site yet, so they keep appearing under the first chapter regardless of which chapter was commented. I assume you commented on chapter 2, in which Twilight tries to attack Starlight with a sword, and Starlight shrinks it into a ball using her magic, right?
I’m afraid you’re incorrect. Surface tension is a term applied specifically to liquids. It occurs in the surface layer of molecules due to cohesive electrostatic forces that pull all the molecules of the liquid together. In the body of liquid they are equal in all directions, but on the surface they’re imbalanced due to the lack of liquid on one side, causing the natural effect that strives to minimize the possible surface area of the liquid.
Basketball ball bounces because its elastic rubber surface deforms and compresses the air inside, which is already under pressure exceeding atmospheric on the outside. The compressed air acts like a spring that expands and restores the spherical shape of the ball, causing it to bounce from the surface it hit. Car tires work the same way, absorbing shocks from road bumps.
A metal ball bounces off the stone floor due to nearly perfect elastic collision of two solid bodies with minimal losses of kinetic energy. This effect would be far less pronounced if the metal ball had any substantial cavities/irregularities, causing the loss of kinetic energy due to plastic deformation of its walls.
100% my bad then⦠feel free to delete my comment.
No worries, let it be for the others who may have similar questions! π
Thank you for commenting in the first place! :3 I wish my readers were more active overall. π