Starlight is pissed when the Wonderbolts don’t show up at the Canterlot Derby in honor of her coronation. She visits Spitfire and devours her mother before her eyes despite her desperate resistance. She then curses Spitfire to devour her favorite student, Surprise, when she fails her training, so that she will realize the importance of her duty to train the Wonderbolts well.
Please be advised this story is 8k words long and contains the following: MLP setting, cruel female alicorn pred (Starlight Glimmer) & unwilling female pegasus prey (Stormy Flare), hypnotized unwilling female pegasus pred (Spitfire) & unwilling female pegasus prey (Surprise), Blaze & Soarin as observers, rape (Starlight fucks Stormy’s pussy with her tongue as she devours her until she cums), same size (Spitfire & Surprise), size difference (Starlight & Stormy), oral vore, painless but fatal gooey digestion. The story is focused on torture and misery of both preys and Spitfire. Reader’s discretion is advised – enjoy! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
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Canterlot’s Cloud Stadium was filled to the brim with ponies. The lower seats were occupied by commoners, the upper seats were occupied by noble ponies, but above them all was the VIP seats that were usually occupied by Royal Sisters and their cronies. But since both Royal Sisters and their cronies were now padding Starlight’s flanks, she took their place.
Starlight is pissed when the Wonderbolts don’t show up at the Canterlot Derby in honor of her coronation. She visits Spitfire and devours her mother before her eyes despite her desperate resistance. She then curses Spitfire to devour her favorite student, Surprise, when she fails her training, so that she will realize the importance of her duty to train the Wonderbolts well.
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All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent. Cover artwork is a screenshot from s5e2 of the original show.
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Incredible work!! This chapter has everything- regurgitation, lburping, torture, feeling the prey go through the guts… this is the hottest thing I’ve read in a long time O_O
If there was painful digestion in this chapter I think I would’ve milked myself dry >_<
Aww, thank you! :3
We still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this website yet unfortunately. I assume you commented on Chapter 4, in which Starlight tortures Spitfire by devouring her mom and belching her in the face as she digests her? It surely was fun to write, and I definitely would make digestion graphic and add disposal too! >:3 Unfortunately, the commissioner doesn’t like those. 🙁
Yes, that comment was on chapter 4!! As much as I love non-fatal / safe digestion, I’m so excited for future stories with painful digestion.
Looking forward to May and June-Dimalad and Chrono have commissioned some of your best! I’m especially looking forward to the story with Daybreaker ^^
Incredible work!! This chapter has everything- regurgitation, lburping, torture, feeling the prey go through the guts… this is the hottest thing I’ve read in a long time O_O
If there was painful digestion in this chapter I think I would’ve milked myself dry >_<
Aww, thank you! :3
We still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this website yet unfortunately. I assume you commented on Chapter 4, in which Starlight tortures Spitfire by devouring her mom and belching her in the face as she digests her? It surely was fun to write, and I definitely would make digestion graphic and add disposal too! >:3 Unfortunately, the commissioner doesn’t like those. 🙁
Yes, that comment was on chapter 4!! As much as I love non-fatal / safe digestion, I’m so excited for future stories with painful digestion.
Looking forward to May and June-Dimalad and Chrono have commissioned some of your best! I’m especially looking forward to the story with Daybreaker ^^
I will try my best to make those stories great! 😉