Starlight’s Revenge 5 – Lyra & Bon Bon
Published: 2026-04-17 17:30:00
Starlight’s Revenge 5 – Lyra & Bon Bon
Description
While Starlight was dealing with the rebellious Wonderbolts in Cloudsdale, Bon Bon tried to convince her coltfriend Sunburst to join the resistance. But Sunburst is hopelessly in love with the pony-eating tyrant. He throws Bon Bon into prison to give her to his marefriend upon her return. Bon Bon refuses to name the other rebels, but Starlight knows that every pony has a weak spot, and Bon Bon’s is Lyra…
Disclaimer
Please be advised this story is 9.3k words long and contains the following: MLP G4 setting, cruel female alicorn pred (Starlight Glimmer), unwilling female pony preys (Bon Bon, Lyra), male pony observer (Sunburst), size difference (bigger pred, smaller preys), anal vore (Lyra), oral vore (Bon Bon), cunnilingus (Starlight/Bon Bon, Lyra/Bon Bon), blowjob and M/F sex (Starlight/Sunburst), painless but fatal melty (non-graphic) digestion. Reader’s discretion is advised – enjoy! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
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Starlight’s Revenge 5 – Lyra & Bon Bon
Published: 2026-04-17 17:30:00
Type:
NSFW
Created: April 17, 2025
Creator: RedNastyFox
Word Count: 9810 words | ~44min
Tags: alicorn pred, anal vore, Applejack, belly bulge, bigger pred, Bon Bon, commission, cruel pred, digestion, fanfiction, fatal vore, female pred, female prey, Lyra, melty digestion, MLP, My Little Pony, non-con, oral vore, pony pred, pony prey, Rainbow Dash, rape, same size, size difference, smaller prey, Starlight Glimmer, Sunburst, superfun, Sweetie Drops, teasing pred, unicorn prey, unwilling prey, vore story
Description:
While Starlight was dealing with the rebellious Wonderbolts in Cloudsdale, Bon Bon tried to convince her coltfriend Sunburst to join the resistance. But Sunburst is hopelessly in love with the pony-eating tyrant. He throws Bon Bon into prison to give her to his marefriend upon her return. Bon Bon refuses to name the other rebels, but Starlight knows that every pony has a weak spot, and Bon Bon’s is Lyra…
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All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
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Incredible work!! This chapter has everything- regurgitation, lburping, torture, feeling the prey go through the guts… this is the hottest thing I’ve read in a long time O_O
If there was painful digestion in this chapter I think I would’ve milked myself dry >_<
Aww, thank you! :3
We still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this website yet unfortunately. I assume you commented on Chapter 4, in which Starlight tortures Spitfire by devouring her mom and belching her in the face as she digests her? It surely was fun to write, and I definitely would make digestion graphic and add disposal too! >:3 Unfortunately, the commissioner doesn’t like those. 🙁
Yes, that comment was on chapter 4!! As much as I love non-fatal / safe digestion, I’m so excited for future stories with painful digestion.
Looking forward to May and June-Dimalad and Chrono have commissioned some of your best! I’m especially looking forward to the story with Daybreaker ^^
I will try my best to make those stories great! 😉
By the way, since you’ve already finished the 4th part of Starlight’s Revenge series, can I ask you for a little favor in the form of a more detailed review on part 5? I spent one week writing it and one more week editing it. I’m on the fence whether putting this much effort into it was worth it, and is it even noticeable to an average reader compared to the previous parts?
Very well written. My only complaint:
“ Then the ball hit the floor and bounced a few times, proving that it was completely solid inside.”
That’s not how sphere’s work. Bouncing relies on surface tension, not whether or not something’s solid. Basketballs are a great example. Sorry if I’m being nitpicky. 😅
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed the story! :3
Unfortunately, we still haven’t fixed the comments on story series on this site yet, so they keep appearing under the first chapter regardless of which chapter was commented. I assume you commented on chapter 2, in which Twilight tries to attack Starlight with a sword, and Starlight shrinks it into a ball using her magic, right?
I’m afraid you’re incorrect. Surface tension is a term applied specifically to liquids. It occurs in the surface layer of molecules due to cohesive electrostatic forces that pull all the molecules of the liquid together. In the body of liquid they are equal in all directions, but on the surface they’re imbalanced due to the lack of liquid on one side, causing the natural effect that strives to minimize the possible surface area of the liquid.
Basketball ball bounces because its elastic rubber surface deforms and compresses the air inside, which is already under pressure exceeding atmospheric on the outside. The compressed air acts like a spring that expands and restores the spherical shape of the ball, causing it to bounce from the surface it hit. Car tires work the same way, absorbing shocks from road bumps.
A metal ball bounces off the stone floor due to nearly perfect elastic collision of two solid bodies with minimal losses of kinetic energy. This effect would be far less pronounced if the metal ball had any substantial cavities/irregularities, causing the loss of kinetic energy due to plastic deformation of its walls.
100% my bad then… feel free to delete my comment.
No worries, let it be for the others who may have similar questions! 😛
Thank you for commenting in the first place! :3 I wish my readers were more active overall. 🙁