Alicurse 5 β Luna’s Revenge
Published: 2025-10-10 06:30:00
Twilight got sick after eating Gilda whole and alive. Celestia has to leave her to find a cure. Luna uses this opportunity to devour her rival. Nopony dares to interfere, not even Twilight’s own brother.
Please, be advised this story is 6.5k words long and contains the following: MLP setting, mean female alicorn pred (Princess Luna), unwilling female alicorn prey (Twilight Sparkle), slight size difference (bigger pred, smaller prey), oral vore, belly bulge, masturbation, cunnilingus, painless gooey digestion, graphic disposal (scat, bones, urine). Reader’s discretion is advised – enjoy! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and above the legal age of consent.
This story has two versions: text only and PDF with 8 illustrations drawn by Shoelace. I will upload them simultaneously to all platforms that support PDF, but you can always download it on my website at the link at the end of this document. ;)
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βUghβ¦β Twilight moaned quietly and opened her eyes. She blinked a few times to focus her blurry vision and smiled weakly as the fuzzy colorful spot turned into the figure of her beloved mentor nodding off on the edge of her bed. βMy Princessβ¦β Twilight called in a weak voice.
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Alicurse 5 β Luna’s Revenge
Published: 2025-10-10 06:30:00
Type:
NSFW
Created: September 25, 2025
Creator: RedNastyFox (story & dialog), Shoelace (art)
Word Count: 6815 words | ~30min
Tags: alicorn pred, alicorn prey, Alicurse, belly bulge, bigger pred, bones, cruel pred, cunnilingus, digestion, Dimalad, disposal, fanfiction, fatal, female pred, female prey, gooey digestion, illustrated story, masturbation, MLP, My Little Pony, oral vore, pony pred, pony prey, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, scat, size difference, smaller prey, Twilight Sparkle, unwilling prey, urine, vore story, watersports
Description:
Twilight got sick after eating Gilda whole and alive. Celestia has to leave her to find a cure. Luna uses this opportunity to devour her rival. Nopony dares to interfere, not even Twilight’s own brother.
The PDF file with the illustrated version of this story can be downloaded at the link below.
This story is a commission I wrote for Dimalad.
The illustrations were commissioned by Dimalad from Shoelace specifically for this story and used with the artist’s permission.
If you want to commission a story from me β check out the Commission Info on RedNastyFox.com! Feel free to boop me anytime β I’m always open to new clients! ;)
All characters in this story are fictional and over the legal age of consent.
Feel free to repost this content on two conditions: credit me as the creator and attach a link to the original post on my website so it can be easily found. I’m a small creator trying to survive in this big and scary world, and I’d appreciate any help with promotion.
PS: It turns out that the day I published this chapter on FA and Eka's, October 10, 2025, was the 15th anniversary of the Friendship is Magic series. Congratulations to all MLP fans! ;)
Is this really the final chapter in Alicurse? D:
Oh, but “Celestia’s Test” is only the first chapter, or you meant the 5th chapter which is called “Luna’s Revenge”? If so, I’m afraid it is the last chapter written for this series at this point. But the commissioner and I have already planned the next chapter. It may take them a while for them to save the money, me to write and the artist to illustrate, but it has to come out eventually. π
Not sure why itβs saying I commented this on Celestias Test, Iβve read all chapters and commented this on Lunaβs Revenge Β―\_(γ)_/Β―
Iβm overjoyed to hear that itβs not over- the more I read good vore fiction the more great ideas I have ~_~ I need to start saving up moneyβ¦
Also, how does one become an illustrator for this website?
Thank you very much for discovering a website bug! I tested it myself and the comments from the last chapter appear under the first chapter for some reason. I will document it to hopefully fix it in the future when I’ll save enough money to pay the programmer.
I’m glad that you enjoyed the story so much! ^__^ It’s my favorite from the whole portfolio too, and I think I’ll continue it on my own eventually even if the commissioner decides to drop it. But in that case there won’t be any more illustrations, because my own artistic skill leaves a lot to be desired and I can’t afford to pay an artist.
This website is mostly just an archive of all stories I wrote and all artworks that are related to them one way or another, plus the commission page to sell my services. For Alicurse series, Dimalad wanted each story to come with a comic from Shoelace and paid me for the stories and them for the art. Both the commissioner and the artist gave their consent for me to publish illustrated stories with these artworks on my website and other platforms like FimFiction.